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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
motionless I sit dwelled in your warmth your sweet kiss leaves me breathless and without a taste essences captivate my imagination deeper every time the precision of your heart growes deeper everyday as I bid the day adiu and wish the night welcome You say "I love you" and as do I [This message has been edited by EroseGrover (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
dont you just love it when someone returns the love back to you...its great to be loved...i know that i think it is...its the greatest feeling in the world isnt it...loved the poem...to bad you didnt submit it for the book...you would have had my vote... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
This is such a beautiful poem. I like your style of writing. Love is one of the greatest feelings. Can't wait to read more! "We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." -Luciano de Crescenzo- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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