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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Being free, is treasured by many people bound, including me. I can travel far and wide, high above, but still, I am denied my love. I can talk, and I can fly, but I can also want to die no one cares, and no one asks, no one sees behind their masks. But one day, I'll be allowed to love to live what I am dreaming of. The gilded chains aren't quite so bad once you get used to being sad. [This message has been edited by ChibiDeathscythe (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
oh damn where have you been hiding??? this is the first poem that i have read by you...and i am amazed...this is such a good poem...you need to quit hiding and start posting... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
"The gilded chains aren't quite so bad once you get used to being sad."-- Too many of us this happens to. Myself included...don't let the sadness break your faith in finding light and love. Powerful work, keep it up!  *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This poem has such a lovely flow! Very beautiful, but with sadness. I do hope you will be able to find happiness ... keep the faith that it will come to you in time, and keep up the great writing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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