Teen Poetry #3 |
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Our High School Years |
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Julie84 New Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 2 |
Our High School Years As I walk through the doors in a scary new school, I try to act grown up, confidant, cool. If the other kids only knew how scared I was inside, they'd laugh, ridicule, and criticize. As I look around for fimiliar faces, I find no one, and no empty spaces. The bell rings my heart skips a beat, I take a step forward but I can't move my feet. I find my class and a friend of mine, I take a breath and say to myself everything will be fine. The day comes to an end, things wern't that bad. I look back and forget about why I was so sad. Two years goes by I'm in 11th grade, I'm thinking about my car, my boyfriend, and the next time I get paid. When I think about life I think of my friends this year, never once thinking about my future, my career. Another year goes by it's my senior year, I start to think about my future and I'm filled with fear. I start studying and doing good on my tests, trying hard to finish my homework and do my best. Getting my report card seeing how I was affected, thinking about my college and hoping I was accepted. Why didn't I think my early years, and took my mind off my tempting peers. It's time to graduate tears running down my face, thinking about my childhood, rushing it like a race. What happened to my petty fears, my pigtails, bruises, my teddybears. As I walk up the stairs I look out to my friends, and faking a smile I know this is the end. I accept my diploma with tears in my eyes, and realize we had the time of our lives. - Julie Jones |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
first of all welcome to passions...i got to say thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with me...i never thought about H.S. the way that you put it in your poem...my poem isnt as good as this but its about graduation...its called my graduation day...if you want read it...you got my vote... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
This is a wonderful poem. It brings back all of the memories of starting a new school year and graduation day. Thank you for that. I seem to be forgetting those school days and how great they were. Keep up the good work. You got my vote. "We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." -Luciano de Crescenzo- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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