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TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

0 posted 2000-07-10 04:33 PM

Hey, I actually wrote it down this time

. This might be the last post from me for a little while, except if I dream up another poem before Monday, cause that is when school starts again for me, and I don’t have that much online time then, but I will still post reply’s. Could never stay away from here for long

If these walls could talk,
you’d know my body is dead,
my mind has been taken over,
that’s why I am so scared,
I can’t control it,
anger is making me blind,
I’ve been left here on my own
chained to a hate of some kind.
If these walls could talk.

If these walls could talk,
you’d know about my fears,
about all those nights I screamed for help,
about all my fallen tears.
You’d know about the demons
haunting me at night,
you’d be able to help me
keep my fire alight,
if these walls could talk.

If these walls could talk
they would say that it’s all right,
God sends His angels
to look over me at night.
They’d encourage me,
say though I am alone
it doesn’t mean I‘m on my own.
He watches me, from above
and showers me with all His love,
if only these walls could talk.

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

toes21
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 24

1 posted 2000-07-10 04:42 PM

Well written is your poem, but I hope that it is not the way you truly feel.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-07-10 04:47 PM

very well written...i hope that you still post some poems even though you will be in school...by the way why are you starting school so early??? and i hope that is not the way that you really feel...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

3 posted 2000-07-11 01:09 AM

Thanks both of you, no need to worry, most of the parts aren't true.

I live in South-Africa, in the Gauteng province...school and holidays are a bit different here than in America

Thanks again.

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

4 posted 2000-07-11 09:58 AM

Once again another masterpiece delivered. Gonna miss your poems and replies. Hope you do get a chance to drop by every once in a while. Have a productive school year.

Thomas A. Plemmons

"I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss The Dance"

-Garth Brooks-

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

5 posted 2000-07-11 10:07 AM

Beautiful poem, well written. Good luck in school and hope you do come back to visit.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-12-01 10:53 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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