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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
In my heart I hold you. In my mind you run. With every breath I take Our life has just begun. You may be there, And I here, But our love is rare- Nothing to fear. So, don't give up Don't give in- For this love we share should be a sin. With all my heart and soul I tell you this is true, I have nothing but love Love for you. I Love You! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful first post, I'm glad that you love someone this much. I hope to see more of you around here soon! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
welcome to passions!! : ) this is a pretty poem...........my ex and i had a relationship that could have been considered a sin since mom didn't like him.....any ways just enjoy your stay,... love, butter |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
This is a great poem. keep up the good work. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Phoebee! Wonderful first post, hope to read more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
WWWEEELLLLLCCCOOOOMMMEEE. This is a very nice first post. Love like this just seems to keep alluding me. Don't let go of it because it sure takes its sweet time coming back to you. jason  |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Welcome to passions. Keep up the good work. I enjoyed the poem very much. Hope you enjoy it here. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Phoebee Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 42Peoria, AZ |
Thank you everyone for the positive feedback. You all are great. I feel so welcome. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions!!!i hope that you enjoy it here as much as i do...this is a beautiful poem...keep up the good work...i hope to read more by you... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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