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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2000-07-09 03:37 AM

Ye of Little Faith

Ye of little faith in heart.
Words strung unto me.
Ye of little faith in soul.
This I never used to be.
Ye of greatness in the mind.
My mind is all I've salvaged now.
Ye who can not find his way.
No heart left to show me how.
Ye of little faith in those
who've led this heart astray.
Ye of little faith in those
who've bleed this soul away.
Ye of lone and dark retreats.
Ye of lonely fate.
Ye so full of love to share.
Ye of little faith.

Jeremy D. Halstead 7-9-00

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-07-09 07:03 AM

Jeremy, I loved it. Your work seems to get better and better everytime I read it. Well keep it up.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

2 posted 2000-07-09 10:18 AM

Forever the lost soul, aren't you? Faith is part of what makes each one of us unique, I hope you find that you have more than you think. Loved it as alwayz, and I still say you do a better job than I do @ this.

Thomas

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-07-09 12:13 PM

I really enjoyed the flow and wording in this Jeremy ... very nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

4 posted 2000-07-09 04:28 PM

This is a wonderful poem. I'm sorry that you feel you've lost your faith, but I'm sure you will feel it again soon. Once you have faith, you can never really lose it.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-07-09 11:18 PM

Ye writes great your work is wonderful. i real enjoyed this one alot and its great to come after a few days and even read greater work then before. keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

April Resi
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

6 posted 2000-07-10 02:05 AM

I think this is the best poem I've read from you. I agree with Chel, they just keep getting better! I loved the way it flowed, I loved the way it sounded, and I loved the point behind it. Keep it up!
April
(p.s. don't ever lose your faith...)

Crystalina123
Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 228

7 posted 2000-07-10 11:52 AM

Jeremy,
I really like this poem perhaps because I've been hurt before as well. I can understand the point behind it. But please don't ever lose your faith.

Love Ya,
Crystal

Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2007-12-01 10:51 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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