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Comfrey83 Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36Winchester, Mass USA |
mass shes no surfer all stuck in the north where the cape serves as a segue embassy to the carolinas Cold water awaits us under the clouds tempting white surfers teasing me up high. surfers in new england must have it the worst (us is the surfers in new england. who can do little but curse as we see perfect surfing clouds above us.) |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was really cool. I don't know if you will see this or not, but hey. Other people should see what you've done. ~Carly "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is a pretty witty poem which i do love. I like it.....kinda humorous due to......yea new england surfers must have it the worst. No waves man......maybe on the jersey shore......rrrrrrrrrright.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Interesting point of view, nice poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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