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hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2000-06-20 07:50 PM

PLEA

allow my heart to speek
i wish to be washed clean
the blood that stains me
drains me without a care
why can't you listen
hear the words cried out!

allow me to touch your ear
with metephors of love's life
let it sink in and stay there
he'll never show you this
but i'll still let you go

please remember me i beg you still
i loathe that day and always will
it'll never be the same
but i pray you never forget me
or ponder on what i lack
because i'm leaving,
and never coming back

There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

"Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live."

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-06-21 02:27 AM

i like this poem. and yes let your heart speek no matter what. good job.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2000-10-17 07:51 PM

Hey. This was incredible, more people should see this... Happy writing...

~Carly

"I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-10-17 07:58 PM

This was sad......it kinda sucks......the situation not the poem haha. Eneh Weh, much appreciated read.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-10-17 08:20 PM

I like it, it's well done. I think the ending of it is really great!
"but i pray you never forget me
or ponder on what i lack
because i'm leaving,
and never coming back"

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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