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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
I'm sick of it. What is my life to you? Would you care if I died? Would you care if I Killed? What would make the differance? One day, I'll take it all back Everything I've given to you. What if I just left? Forget this $H--, I'm just sick of it. |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
I can surely relate, but wheneva I get sick of things, I tell myself not to crack, but to stick to the fight, even if every drop of energy has been drained from me. Great poem, lotta emotion, keep it up. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Jason, I'm sorry that there is someone or something that makes you feel this way. I just want you to know that yes, your life is treasured by many, including me, and I would care if you died or killed. If you ever need to talk, feel free to e-mail me. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
jason this is a very sincere piece.... i gotta tell you i don't know you but i've always thought to myslef that if somethngs makes me feel sh**ty then it's better if i try to stay away from it.....and know that as messed up things seem everything happens for the best...keep your head up best wishes love butter |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Jason, I am sorry that you feel this way. I know though that it happens to everyone at one point. Just keep your head up. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
well, you know to call me before you jump. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jacman i am starting to like your work more and more with every poem i read by you...do you really think that people wouldnt care if you got killed or died???there are people who do care...and alot of people would be affected by it...so dont think that way anymore... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Jay, Your anger shows through in this one. Carmen come out for a little to help you on this particular piece? You know I care even if I haven't been there as much as I used to. quit hanging out with such depressing people. You know who I mean. Thomas A. Plemmons "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
I am so sorry that you are so upset over something. If you ever need to talk, email me! (I won't even charge you the first time!) Seriously though, it was a good piece, although very sad. I hope you get thru whatever this is. April |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
More power to you Jason. If you feel this way, it really is time to move on. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey, this poem has a lot of emotion and personal experience behind it. Wonderful job of expressing yourself, I liked this one, even if it is a little on the dark side. Good job! *~Meredith~* It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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