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Teen Poetry #3

Yesterday

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

0 posted 2000-07-09 11:22 AM

I actually wrote this a few days ago.

YESTERDAY:

Yesrday,
I heard your voice calling me from afar.
I reaized then that I could
no longer live without you.
So I searched far and near,
For a way to take myself to you,
So I might hold you dear.

Now I found my chariot of fire
driven with six fine steeds
to take me there
like a wisk of air.

In so saying, my enamored queen,
I'll be there soon,
Like the clouds of dream.

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-07-09 01:35 PM

This was a very beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it very much, and I hope that you will see her soon.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

toes21
Junior Member

since 2000-07-09

Posts 24

2 posted 2000-07-10 04:30 PM

Words from the heart, they are so true, I enjoyed your poem.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-07-10 04:36 PM

jose this is a good poem...and whoever the girl is that you wrote this for i hope you find her...good luck...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

4 posted 2000-07-11 10:21 AM

Thanks, I'm glad you guys read my poem, and I gope to find myselm with her soon too.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-12-01 10:53 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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