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EroseGrover
Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44
SD,CA 92126

0 posted 2000-07-11 01:21 PM


My mother always
told me many diffrent things.

That I could be anything
I wanted if I put my mind to it

She always told me to do the right thing
not to lie,steal or cheat.

quite often she would say
young lady what have you done!

But most important she told me
that she loved me and always would!

This is a short poem and most of mine are but
this one comes from the heart and I hope
you all like it



[This message has been edited by EroseGrover (edited 07-11-2000).]

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LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-07-11 01:28 PM


I do like this, it's exactly the way I feel about my mother. I like the way your poem reads so honest and innocently.

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-01 10:54 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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