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Mothers always love you
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Mothers always love you |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
My mother always told me many diffrent things. That I could be anything I wanted if I put my mind to it She always told me to do the right thing not to lie,steal or cheat. quite often she would say young lady what have you done! But most important she told me that she loved me and always would! This is a short poem and most of mine are but this one comes from the heart and I hope you all like it [This message has been edited by EroseGrover (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I do like this, it's exactly the way I feel about my mother. I like the way your poem reads so honest and innocently. *~Meredith~* It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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