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When I First Met You |
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BABYFACE Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 17DALLAS,TX |
WHEN I FIRST MET YOU IT WAS KINDA STRANGE BECAUSE I WAS SO NERVOUS TO MEET YOU!!!! I THOUGHT YOU WERE MY PERFECT MAN. BUT I WAS SO WRONG. IT ALL STARTED OUT GREAT YOU KNEW EVERYTHING TO SAY. IT WAS PERFECT I THINK THAT IS WHY I FELL FOR YOU SO QUICK. I GUESS I SHOULD HAVE GOTTEN TO KNOW YOU BETTER BEFORE I BECAME YOU GIRL. WE WERE TOGETHER FOR THREE MONTHS THEN THINGS STARTED TO CHANGE ALL THE CALLS JUST TO SAY I LOVE YOU OR I MISS YOU QIUT THEN ONE NIGHT I CALLED AND SOME GIRL ANSWERED IF YOU ONLY KNEW HOW BAD THAT HERT. WELL ONE DAY YOU WILL ESPECIALLY IF YOU CONTINUE TO PLAY GIRLS LIKE YOU PLAYED ME. LIKE THE SAYING GOES WHAT GOES AROUND COMES AROUND. SO THAT MEANS ONE DAY WHEN YOU REALLY ARE IN THE REALATINOSHIP FOR LOVE THAT GIRL WILL PLAY YOU JUST LIKED YOU PLAYED ME AND EVERY OTHER GIRL YOU HAVE PLAYED!!!! WRITTEN TO MY EX DSR IT'S SO TRUE!!!! |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I know what you are going through. I wanted to just that I thought what you wrote was very well written. I just want you to know that things do get better, but it will take a while. Just keep your head up. Good luck in everything you do. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed yourself powerfully BabyFace. I've always found that it does help to write it out, and get it down on paper. Sometimes we may not have answers to all the questions, but know that others care and feel for you here. PS ... it will be a little easier for the other poets to read your work if you don't type all in capital letters ... and adding some line breaks between the verses just helps the eyes follow your thoughts better  Hope to read more BabyFace! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-09-2000).] |
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toes21 Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 24 |
Well written, and you by far are not alone in that kind of hurt. I do hope all is better now for you. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
what can i say...we are living in reality...thats how guys are and some girls too...we just got to live with it...and i do think that in the future he will get what he deserves... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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