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heatherbear Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 48 |
I look into the mirror, what is it that I see? So many things bundled into one, and that's what makes me, me. There's some things, I just can't understand. But then there's so many, that I can. I have two hands I use to touch, and a heart I use to love. Two eyes made out of motivation and trust, and a spirit like a dove. Two ears I use to listen, to anything they will. And a happiness that surrounds me, no matter how I feel. Sometimes there is a sadness, that's very rarely here. And sometimes there is a hurt, that might bring a tear. Sometimes I can't find courage, bravery or skill. But that will never stop me, I'll keep going, I will. But most of all, I see me. The same person, that I'm so happy to be. Never give up on yourself, no matter how bad it feels. We all pull through it sometime, and that is a deal. The moral of this poem-don't give up, ever. Go stand in front of a mirror and point out all the good things about yourself. I guarantee you'll feel better. Go out and help someone that might have it a little worse than you-they probably feel the same way. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
 Excellent HeatherBear! So positively uplifting! Loved it! Best wishes, /Kit |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
reall nice encouraging poem,,... i really like it.. |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
This is the first I have read of yours and I really like it. Your advice is very good and I hope to see more from you. jason |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful and uplifting poem. It certianly made my day! Thank you for sharing this wonderful message with us!"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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heatherbear Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 48 |
Thank you all for your awesome replies. I decided to write this because most poems in this forum are said or depressing. We need to put a little more happiness here!!! Keep up the great work! ~~heather~~ |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
That is one of the most uplifting poem i've read so far! Excellent |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a really good poem...i have read others by you but this is by far the best...keep up the good work...i look forward to reading more by you...oh and i was wondering why you didnt submit this for the book??? you really should cuz you would have my vote...and probably everybody elses... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is i think one of your best. i enjoyed this the most so far but i know i'll see even better work from you cause well your you. keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
most impressive. ---------- you are, by far, one the happiest people i've met. i mean, both IRL, and the people on the net! -------------- believe it or not it takes a lot to be happy. you have a gift to see that and share it. i like the line: Two eyes made out of motivation and trust i wondered what eyes were made out of. =) keep it up!< !signature--> We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
This is such a happy and uplifting poem. I hope that those who do not have much self confidence read this and go look in a mirror. Great work. This made my day "We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other." -Luciano de Crescenzo- |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
really lovely poem. someone's gotta motivate us all thanks for sharing this |
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heatherbear Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 48 |
You guys are all so nice! Thank you so much. I guess i will submit this for the book-why not? Right? If anyone ever needs to talk feel free to email me anytime!!! ~~Heather~~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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