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Writer's block
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
This is a rap I wrote, ryhme scheme is pretty simple enjoy WRITER's BLOCK Writer's block, I can't chop No good words Have ya heard? Can't write no lines of thoughts divine Seen this, It's useless then. Yo I'm really screwed So what do I do? frustrations galore, can't write no more… Cause I'm stuck! |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
This poem was true. I enjoyed it very much, and I was happy to see that you knew what you were writing about. It was very well written and put together. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Thank Chel I'm glad you liked it you're very sweet |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Hey Jose, I've read all of your posts. This is the first one I have replied to though. I relate to this one because I have never really been able to ryme. My favorite line in the poem is the last one. Keep it up. jason |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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