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Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC

0 posted 2000-07-08 09:38 PM


This is a rap I wrote,
ryhme scheme is pretty simple
enjoy

WRITER's BLOCK

Writer's block,
I can't chop
No good words
Have ya heard?

Can't write no lines
of thoughts divine
Seen this,
It's useless then.

Yo I'm really screwed
So what do I do?
frustrations galore,
can't write no moreā€¦

Cause I'm stuck!

© Copyright 2000 Jose Marti - All Rights Reserved
Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-07-09 07:08 AM


This poem was true.  I enjoyed it very much, and I was happy to see that you knew what you were writing about.  It was very well written and put together.  Keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
2 posted 2000-07-09 10:59 AM


Thank Chel I'm glad you liked it you're very sweet
Jacman
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since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
3 posted 2000-07-09 02:24 PM


Hey Jose, I've read all of your posts.  This is the first one I have replied to though.  I relate to this one because I have never really been able to ryme.  My favorite line in the poem is the last one.  Keep it up.

jason

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-01 10:47 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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