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My River
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My River |
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Linzi Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 35Pennsylvania, USA |
The River Flashes of lightning bear Wanting's deep lust While thunder roars of Needing's sharp thrusts Churning, fearful, clouds do stifle warm rays, Cloud thy thoughts with Love's enemy Haze Visions of you in a steady rain Fall to be environed in this river of pain The storm lingers long, not wanting to accept The reality of Love and it's powerful depth Not able to admit that love will prevail The storm rages on, fear is love's veil The waters race with want and desire The angry river creeps higher and higher The floodgates close to fight the tears A river of memories, dreams, and fears But streams of love, sweet-soft do flow To soften the rush of this bittersweet blow Overflowing with thoughts of you Raging with love, clear-blue, and true The times we've shared drop soft and slow And splash amongst the fallen, below Sinister dark clouds that hid this emotion Could not withstand true love and devotion Your smile shines brightly, high above Casting reflections of a new-found love It's light breaks through all previous fear To purify this river and dry up these tears ~*~Linzi~*~ "Ignore reality; there's nothing you can do about it" ~ Natalie Imbruglia |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is so beautiful...it flows gracefully...i have no words for what i am feeling now. This is a master piece, keep up the good stuff. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Excellent, excellent, excellent. This ia absolutely magnificent. You definitely have my vote, and you have me hungry for more. jason |
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Linzi Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 35Pennsylvania, USA |
Thanks again! It really means a lot! ~*~Linzi~*~ "Ignore reality; there's nothing you can do about it" ~ Natalie Imbruglia |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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