navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #3 » Not the Same Way
Teen Poetry #3
Post A Reply Post New Topic Not the Same Way Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Linzi
Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 35
Pennsylvania, USA

0 posted 2000-07-08 04:51 PM


Not the Same Way

I know that you see me
But the way that you do
Is not the same way that I see you

I look in your eyes
But the love that I see
Is not a love that you feel for me

I know that you hear me
But the way that you do
Is not the same way that I hear you

I listen to your voice
But the words that you say
Tell me that you don't feel the same way

I know that you think of me
But the way that you do
Is not the same way that I think of you

I can tell what you're thinking
But the thoughts in your head
Are of someone else, and your love for them

I know that you care
But the way that you do
Is not the same way that I care about you

I feel what's in your soul
But the soul that I see
Has an empty space where she should be

You love her, but she doesn't love you
I wish that I could make you see
I love you, but you don't love me
Perhaps it wasn't meant to be

~*~Linzi~*~

© Copyright 2000 Lindsay Yurcaba - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-07-08 05:42 PM


Welcome to Passions Linzi!

What a wonderful first post ... you've
expressed yourself beautifully in this verse.

Please check your e-mail shortly for a special message. Keep up the great writing!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Jacman
Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
2 posted 2000-07-08 07:08 PM


you have totally captured my pathetic love life for about the past six years.  I hope you know that you are very talented  and I can't wait to see more of you.

jason

Linzi
Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 35
Pennsylvania, USA
3 posted 2000-07-09 02:36 PM


Thank you both very much! It means a lot to know that people actually read and enjoy my poetry...I hope to continue to post here, and hopefully eventually get more feedback! Thanks again!


~*~Linzi~*~

"Ignore reality; there's nothing you can do about it" ~ Natalie Imbruglia


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-01 10:47 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #3 » Not the Same Way

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary