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Chel
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since 2000-07-01
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Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-07-07 11:09 AM


You


I looked to you for answers
I looked to you for love
I looked to you for friendship
You were there through everything
You were the friend I always wanted
I needed your love
You had given it to me
I wanted your friendship
You had given it to me
You had been the one i'd call
I knew it all
You were my destiny
You were my life
You were always there
You'll be in my heart now, forever


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

© Copyright 2000 Michelle Y. Plocinik - All Rights Reserved
LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-07-07 11:30 AM


Very unique and beautiful. Great job!

*~Meredith~*

I am none but the angel
Who sings you to sleep
As you pray to God
Your soul to keep
*Me

Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
2 posted 2000-07-07 01:54 PM


I love this Chel
Thank you for having written it.

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
3 posted 2000-07-07 02:28 PM


Chel~ yet anotherone by you that I enjoyed very much! You have come so far in writing! Keep them coming because I love them all! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~

TAP2
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA
4 posted 2000-07-07 02:30 PM


Loved each and every line. This person sounds very special. Hold on to whoever it is.

Thomas

Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
5 posted 2000-07-08 05:54 AM


The simple expressiveness of this was beautiful.  I love how you seem to realize that even though you and this person might not always be together, you'll have have a place in your heart for them.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
6 posted 2000-07-08 08:16 AM


Thank you all for reading my poem.  I hope that you all enjoyed it as much as I did writing it.  I am glad that you were pleased with the way it was worded.  It seemed right at the time.  Well all I can say to everyone is to keep your heads up and work hard.  It will all be worth it in the end.

Luv always,
Chel  


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Acies
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7 posted 2000-07-08 11:33 PM


I've always thought that poetry is beautiful because it's an expression of ones feelings.  In this poem you expressed it so well.  Glad to see that you're happy in life.  Can't wait to read your other poems.
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
8 posted 2000-07-09 02:48 PM


damn this is a good poem...you expressed so much feeling...whoever this is for must be someone worth writing a poem like this for...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Jacman
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since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
9 posted 2000-07-09 02:51 PM


I think that everyone should have a friend like you.  Very sweet poem keep it up.

jason

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Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2007-12-01 10:47 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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