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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
You I looked to you for answers I looked to you for love I looked to you for friendship You were there through everything You were the friend I always wanted I needed your love You had given it to me I wanted your friendship You had given it to me You had been the one i'd call I knew it all You were my destiny You were my life You were always there You'll be in my heart now, forever "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Very unique and beautiful. Great job! *~Meredith~* I am none but the angel Who sings you to sleep As you pray to God Your soul to keep *Me |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I love this Chel Thank you for having written it. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Chel~ yet anotherone by you that I enjoyed very much! You have come so far in writing! Keep them coming because I love them all! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Loved each and every line. This person sounds very special. Hold on to whoever it is. Thomas |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
The simple expressiveness of this was beautiful. I love how you seem to realize that even though you and this person might not always be together, you'll have have a place in your heart for them. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Thank you all for reading my poem. I hope that you all enjoyed it as much as I did writing it. I am glad that you were pleased with the way it was worded. It seemed right at the time. Well all I can say to everyone is to keep your heads up and work hard. It will all be worth it in the end. Luv always, Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I've always thought that poetry is beautiful because it's an expression of ones feelings. In this poem you expressed it so well. Glad to see that you're happy in life. Can't wait to read your other poems. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
damn this is a good poem...you expressed so much feeling...whoever this is for must be someone worth writing a poem like this for...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
I think that everyone should have a friend like you. Very sweet poem keep it up. jason |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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