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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Don't you know I've wished for you? Can you tell you've painted me thrilled? See my elation, Feel my heart skip beats for your love. Yet, today I look around and see you're empty, I see your imperfections, I view all of your flaws, Love was never there... You deserve someone with pure love, You need someone with matching affections, Please forgive my absence, It's all done for freedom's sake. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I liked this poem. It was short, but it had a point which I liked. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i to enjoyed the point please do keep it up. and your writing is very good my friend. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Very good, this one hits really close to home. Now I'm off to read more. jason |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I can't believe i missed this one too. I'm glad I've decided to search for all your poems. This is really good and your use of words is extra ordinary. keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jenn~You have all these hidden poems that I havent read yet...But I am glad Acire brought this back up...I had a chance to read it...You just opened yourself up and got straight to the point...I wish I could do that...Keep up the good work!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I'm sure I have about another thirty or so! I didn't know that you guys hadn't read most of them yet! I started in here way back in July, so I just started posting stuff then. I'm glad you guys like what I do, that's important to me. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like how you've expressed yourself here, great job  |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Ahhh Jenn, if only I could say that I didn't understand what you meant here...... lol. Keep up the good work! Vreni |
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