Teen Poetry #3 |
Only In My Dreams |
sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Only in my Dreams I have always dreamed of the day You would come back to me Tell me you were wrong, Try to make me see That you needed a little space, And a little time to think, That you needed to search your life To find that missing link. Tell me that you're sorry And that you want me back, That you weren't avoiding me And your feelings aren't in lack Tell me you were afraid to talk to me And tell me how you really felt Every night you prayed And by your bedside you knelt Praying for the day that I will understand These feelings you can't tame But little did you know That I have felt the same I thought you no longer cared for me As I longed for yesterday Wondering so much Why it had to happen this way Why we had to get so close And then drift so far As I sat by my window Wishing upon a star Wishing that you Felt the way I do Wishing that you Still loved me too You tell me you need me in your life As you wrap me in your arms I feel so special Like you can protect me from all harms I am suddenly yanked back to my harsh reality As my pulse returns to a gentle tappin' It is then that I realize I am waiting for something that will never happen. ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great poem....wonderful yet sad words. It seems that he's betrayed you and you wish you could change it all, but I guess some guys just deserve what they get and you deserve better than that. Good luck and keep em comin'! Salooma |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh Hon, my heart goes out to you. You don't know how many times I've wished for things I know can never be. I hope that writing this helped your pain. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great poem even though it was pretty sad.Keep up the great work! Lauren |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
very touching, great work keep it up |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i am sorry that this happen to you ...but you know what eventually something good will come out of this...maybe you will find someone that you would rather be with...keep up the good work... ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
OMG!!! I think my heart just fell on the floor. OMG!!! you almost put me in tears. This is one of the most sweetest poems I've ever read in passions. OMG!!! Did you ever give this to him? I hope you did...This poem is just so touching...It's like I lost all my strength and just dropped on the ground. Im very glad i read this I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
What a saddening poem. I'm so sorry that you feel this way. If anyone knowsmore about wanting something that could never be it is me. I think I've cried myself to sleep everynight for the last 6 weeks.I know how you feel. i want so much to have a relationshipwith my dad again, but I know that it's never going to happen again. But I think that if you just remember that things will happen the way they were meant to be, (that doesn't brighten your day I'm sure) but it will put the situation into better perspective. Thank you for sharing this with us!! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
thanx for your replies, they were especially appreciated on this poem. Much Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey there This was so sad, but i know what you're feeling. I just wrote a poem called "Only In My Dreams" that im hopefully gonna post when i get the strength to. its kind of like this, hoping that my dreams really will come true, but i know they wont. kinda depressing when you think about it really but hey keep that chin up and smile because tomorrow's a brand new day and your options are wide open love always ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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