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Leaving here |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
It's time ofr me to go on, And leave this god forsaken place. I know for many life is precious.. But to me its just a waste. I dont wanna leave, I really want to stay. But god... I had no intention of living this way. I dont wanna leave, My loved ones behind. I hope they understand, That it's becoming my time. I'm sad and the feeling wont go away. If i keep on fighting, The pain will only stay. I hope that you understand, It's not cause of you. It's just me and how i feel. I'm sorry there is nothing you can do. I've tried for so long, To put on a smile, But all i have been doing, Is pretending all this while. So like i said, In some time if i am still sad, I will leave here, With no other feelings let... But glad. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
i hate reading poetry like this, but it was a good poem, i just hope these feelings arent your own, i see your new here, passions is a great home coming here ana posting my work helped to save my life...i hope to see more of your work (but happier ones) If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree, great poem, but sad message. I hope this isn't a personal experience. If it is I hope you soon realize all there this to live for. This is written very well! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I hope you're referring to moving or something. Because no matter how hopeless it all seems, you have lots to live for, your future will get brighter. I liked the poem, even though it is sad! Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sad, i hope all is well and stuff with you though. Don't be sad, i hate it when people are sad. Good poem though.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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