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This is for all of you
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This is for all of you |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
I just wanted to write something for all of you here to show my appreciation. You will never understand how far I've come in my own problems, just by hearing all of your kind words, and beautiful poetry. I hope you all like it. Something new... I've experienced something new today. I made a discovery and I must say, it amazes me. I've never felt so good inside, my feelings and emotions, I don't have to hide. I've showed you all the scars from my once broken soul. you've healed my spirit, and challenged my mind. My heart, and all that is within me have I poored out to you. You have filled my vessel which once ran dry. The bitter root within me, has given place to a tree of life. May you all recieve such a blessing, for your works shall recieve such an end. thank you jacman |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a very nice and thoughtfull poem, and I am sure everybody in here will appreciate it a lot.  We all are different from everybody else, we found a wonderful way to express ourselves, to cope with what ever situation live throughs at us and how to handle it, we found a way to strengthen each other through our poetry, like you said in this wonderful poem. I absolutely agree with you 100%, the poeple in here as helped me in ways they don't know, thanks for the wonderful poem.  Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
J...I was there when you started writing this poem..I'm glad to see you finished..especially the way you did. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I thought the poem was very well written. I am glad that you wrote it, I don't think there was a better way of expressing the way you felt. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a lovely tribute to all the wonderful poets at Passions who give us inspiration each day Jacman ... beautifully expressed, straight from the heart! Best wishes, /Kit |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Jay, Glad you feel that way about the people in here. They have also awakened in me a side I let sit dormant. Thank you for pointing me in this direction, and for the friend that you have alwayz been. Thomas A. Plemmons |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful dedication to Passions. I'm so glad that Passions means as much to you as it does to me. It's a wonderful place, and I can't imagine my life without it! (Maybe that's because I don't have a life, but anyway... )"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Keep up the good work Jacman. I think the world needs more positive poems like yours. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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