Teen Poetry #3 |
Plea (A New One) |
hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
allow my heart to speek i wish to be washed clean the blood that stains me drains me without a care why can't you listen hear the words cried out! allow me to touch your ear with metephors of love's life let it sink in and stay there please remember me i beg you still i loathe that day and always will it'll never be the same but i pray you never forget me or ponder on what i lack because i'm leaving, and never coming back --Hoppy 6/20/00 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant "Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live." |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is sad, I got goosebumps while I was reading it. I know the feeling, screaming, but still, no break through. Another wonderful poem, amazing as always. Keep it up. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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