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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 271


0 posted 2000-07-08 01:04 AM


allow my heart to speek
i wish to be washed clean
the blood that stains me
drains me without a care
why can't you listen
hear the words cried out!

allow me to touch your ear
with metephors of love's life
let it sink in and stay there
please remember me i beg you still
i loathe that day and always will

it'll never be the same
but i pray you never forget me
or ponder on what i lack
because i'm leaving,
and never coming back


--Hoppy
6/20/00


There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

"Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live."

© Copyright 2000 Hoppy - All Rights Reserved
TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa
1 posted 2000-07-08 05:53 AM


This is sad, I got goosebumps while I was reading it. I know the feeling, screaming, but still, no break through.

Another wonderful poem, amazing as always. Keep it up.



Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-01 10:43 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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