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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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My World A world of fake smiles Cruel glances Cheap laugher It’s staged Not real Many of them don’t care How you feel They act like your friends But they’re not Some will turn their backs on you Just cause you’re not hot If you look good Your in But it takes a lot If you’re not thin The worse you look The more it takes The nicer you are The more your heart breaks You’ve gotta be tough You have to be able to wait Sometimes it even makes it worse If you have a date They think too much of themselves Think that they are the best They don’t care how you feel You’re no better than the rest I ask myself why Anyone would want so much to be accepted into that group Why anyone would to be included In that fake giant hoop Of egotistical people That usually don’t care about you But I’ve realized Some people want to belong too Hi everyone!! This is away from my usual topic. I wrote this in a couple minutes, so don't be surprised if it's not too good. Yes, I realize it's long, a whole lot longer than usual for me. I wrote this about my social group, the "in group." Now that I'm in this group, I can't understand why people would try so hard to get in. I know that a lot of people in the "in group" are really great people, like most of my friends. But, there are still those cruel ones, that sometimes overpower the other ones. Well, that's about it for now. Thanks for reading! Bel |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hello Bel, I liked this poem very much. I didn't know why you had to explain yourself. I think it was well written. Well I guess people have a reason for everything. Just keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
hi great poem i can totally relate i never had any prejudices when choosing friends & i got made fun of because of those who i talked to that weren't "cool" they always said i could do better when choosing boyfriends maybe i didnt want to do better maybe i perferred nice guys rather then beautiful stuck up & coinceited ones i dunno anyway luved the poem sowwie about the rambling  LOVE ELMO!!! <3 |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
bel this is a really good poem...i understand what you are saying...the only reason we join those cliques is because we want to feel like we have friends...i know i had my only little group in H.S. but everybody does...you know what im saying...but its not like those are the only friends we can have...we just dont trust them the way you trust your own group of friends...there was this girl at school who thought she was like a walking barbie doll...but really she was just a fake...and its girls like that who i dont like...as long as your not like that its all good...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Seaking out loud to each of us who have been on the outside looking in. Great poem. Thomas |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed yourself well in the Bel! From someone who's walked on both sides of the fence ... "the grass is always greener on the other side" (till you get there that is) Great writing, and nice to see a glimpse from the inside looking out. Well done!Best wishes, /Kit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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