Teen Poetry #3 |
Jekyll and Hyde |
TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
It is a battle that rages daily Deep within our soul Our own private Jekyll and Hyde We choose which side take control Our dark side filled with secrets Hidden anger from the past Letting him have his evil way Will be our end when the day has past The Jekyll that we choose to show Brings love and compassion at his side Hiding, repressing the horror show Taht crashes us in chilling tides But sometimes we let the dark one out This satan deep within Giving action to desires That speak of mortal sin The battle rages on each day Left for us to choose Will we let the light show through Or will Jekyll lose? Thomas A. Plemmons 7-5-00 |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Thomas! What a wonderful theme, and so cleverly expressed ... really well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I like how you related that to all people and not as a personal battle...I'm gonna push some more keys now. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
Loved it! It was just neat how you expressed it. And so very true!!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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