»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #3
»
Purest Beauty
| Teen Poetry #3 |
|
Purest Beauty |
|
|
FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
(I cannot recall whether I have posted this poem yet or not, but I decided to post it anyways. ) ~~~*Beauty*~~~ The moon yawns as it leaves the night sky to welcome to warmth and light of the sunrise. Accepting its welcome amidst the horizon, a peek of light awakens the sleepy Earth. The piano played with such passion and soul that the world around it stops, just for a moment, to listen to its majestic sound bring awe to the world. A mother holding her newborn child embracing its delicate body sings softly into its ear sweet lullabies of love A horse runs free in the wild with no worries or fears it simply contains the desire to embrace and breath the pure essence of nature and life. The sun tucks in Mother Earth for the long night ahead and a proud moon enters the night sky... Earth's guardian angel while we sleep When I look deep into the heart of the world I almost lose my breath for what I find is beauty in its, purest form. ~*Yesterday is gone, let go of the past; tommorrow will bring new hope to grasp*~ |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Rachel - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well flip this is the first poem i think that i have read by you...and i really like it...whether or no you posted it before or not many people havent had the chance to read it...like me...keep posting your work i would really like to see more... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
||
|
Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I loved this poem very much. I hope that you keep up the work. It was very beautifully written. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
||
LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful poem! You describe the purity of simple beauty well. These little things are usually lost on us, and I'm glad that you see these little things for what they are. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
||
|
TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
As a permanent fan of all that you write, I loved this piece. Very descriptive and eloquent. Can't wait to see more. Thomas |
||
|
LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
I think this poem is beautiful itself...it just captures little things in life perfectly. Wonderful job! "Of all those arts in which the wise excel, Nature's chief masterpiece is writing well." ~Essay on Poetry, John Sheffield "Those who trust in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint." ~Isaiah 40:3 |
||
|
FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Hey, thanks for all the replies...I really appreciate ANY kind of criticism, positive or negative.  )~Rachel~ |
||
|
Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
