Teen Poetry #3 |
A Question of Fate |
DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
I sit and wonder what the future holds for me. I think of ten, twenty, thirty years from now, who and where will I be? I ponder over who I am now and the things I enjoy to do, and wonder if my future self will be someone totally new. What does my future hold? What will life send my way? Will I live a hundred years? Or die later today? if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger. |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
This is a very good poem. I think that every one wonders this at times. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a really good poem...i think that everyone has had the same thoughts as you...i know i have...but we will never figure it out until our time comes... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
This is such a strong subject that I have written about myself aswell. Its funny how people change over the years but you can never picture yourself being different in 30 years. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very thought-provoking poem DJLI! So many questions ... so few answers ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
This poem is pretty cool. The last two really provoke thought. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I loved this poem it does make people wonder, and sometimes even more. I hope you find the answers to your questions eventually. Well take care. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I think most of us ask the same questions in our youth. I can tell you from experience, now that youth is a distant memory in my past, that your destiny is in your hands. There are external influences, of course, but for the most part you create your world by the passions you have for work, pleasure, and love. Best advice I have ever heard was, "be yourself, and follow your dreams". Don't let others tell you how to live. Enjoyed reading your poem. Good Luck! dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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