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BabyGirl1
Member

since 2000-07-02

Posts 91
Morris, IL

0 posted 2000-07-05 10:10 PM

His eyes so full of passion
His heart beats every word
He looks into my eyes
As he reaches for my chin

I lose myself into a world
Beyond this one I know
Filled with lavender and lilac
And roses in a row

The smell of his cologne
And the warmth of his embrace
Make his every motion
Graceful, but yet full of strength

We pull away from one another
Still gazing in each others eyes
He grabs my hand ever so gently
And whispers, I Love You So.

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2000-07-06 05:28 AM

AAAAAWWWWWWW.....how sweet!!!! That's actually the first poem I've ever read about a first kiss...now all of the rest I'll ever read have some pretty big shoes to fill...you pulled it off beautifully.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-07-06 07:48 AM

Wonderful writing here BabyGirl ... you've described this encounter beautifully! Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

3 posted 2000-07-06 08:40 AM

This poem was beautiful, babygirl. You described it so wonderfully. Keep up the good work. Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

4 posted 2000-07-06 11:36 AM

Hi BabyGirl1
You described it beautifully. Don't remember it as being that vivid but you renwed the memory in my head. Loved it!

TAP2

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

5 posted 2000-07-06 11:47 AM

Really great poem, I especially love the lines;

filled with lavender and lilac
and roses in a row.

I just love imagery in poetry. And by the way, the reason Tom doesn't remember it being that vivid is because it is about me... hahaha.

your favorite freak
jason

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-12-01 10:31 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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