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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
Apologize Don't do it out of sympathy I know you don't feel for me I've come to realize not everything will go my way But I hoped you were the one that would stay Is this what you think I deserve? If so you've got some nerve An apology is all I ask I can't believe I thought it would last You were the one I most respected "I'm sorry," you say? Well, apology excepted |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
That is a really good poem. There are lots of people I need to say I'm sorry to and you expressed that in the best way. Keep up the good work. Within you I lose myself. Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again. -unkown- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a very beautiful poem...and it is nothing but the truth...if i can turn back the hands of time and tell everyone i have hurt to say sorry...i would...but i cant do that...i should have done it long ago...but i didnt... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It shows me how big a person you are by being able to forgive even if you don't know whether it was sincere or not. Good for Ya. |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
You couldn't have been more on the money with this one. Sometimes a simple "I'm sorry," makes a world of diffrence. Nice piece, keep it up. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great piece. rather enjoyed this read so please keep it up i hope to read more real soon. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Sometimes an apology is all you need to get over even the biggest of hills. I'm sorry that you felt pain but I'm glad that you got what you needed to find it in your heart to forgive this person! Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
And so life goes, one lesson at a time. ~~nice writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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