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Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-07-05 12:28 PM

I Was Loved

Yesterday I went with you
Tomorrow you were gone

What was to be done?
You once loved me

Why did I ruin it?
I was loved

I thought you would be happy
Without me

What was I thinking?
I was so wrong

You miss me and
I was loved

I tried to get you back
I was too late

You were gone but
I was loved

"True friends stab you in the front"

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-07-05 01:53 PM

Love is probably the one gift we all take for granted until it's gone. Lovely poem, you've said so much in such few words. Great job.

*~Meredith~*

I am none but the angel
Who sings you to sleep
As you pray to God
Your soul to keep
*Me

[This message has been edited by LyricFetish (edited 07-05-2000).]

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

2 posted 2000-07-05 02:28 PM

The only light to find in all of this is that you are always loved by somebody. I know it hurts when you feel you've lost the heart of the one you want, but love is never far away.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Zombie Man
Member

since 1999-06-22

Posts 52
Va

3 posted 2000-07-05 03:13 PM

Thats bad when it happens but at least you have love. There is always somebody who loves a person. Good job.

Zombie Man

In life, love will out live us all.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-07-05 03:39 PM

we are all loved...but its hard to find that one true love...someone you would want to spend the rest of your life with...hopefully you will get this person back in your life...you never realize what you had until you lost it...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

5 posted 2000-07-05 04:33 PM

"You were gone but
I was loved"

I'm glad that you were loved, even if it was for a short time, even if you lost it. It will come back to you, someday. Good writing.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

6 posted 2000-07-05 05:05 PM

well girl, I definately have to say this one was great! I think we have all felt the terrible feeling of "its too late" I'm sorry that you feel the way you do! I hope that soon your heart will heal and you will be able to move on and be truly happy! Keep it up my friend and keep your head up too!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

p.s. see look, I got to the store and back pretty damn fast huh?

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~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~

[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 07-05-2000).]

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

7 posted 2000-07-05 10:40 PM

This a very simple poem, and that is what I like about it. I hope you do find that lost love and hold on to it. Good luck!!

jason

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

8 posted 2000-07-06 04:03 PM

Your poem is very good. Nobody is happier without you. You'll always be loved.

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

9 posted 2000-07-06 05:04 PM

I want to thank everyone for reading my poem. I enjoyed writing it hopefully as much as you liked reading it. I am only hoping that I was loved touched someone. I haven't been very successful with coming up with another topic, but hopefully soon. Once again thank you everyone for reading this poem. Take care and always do your best.

Luv always,
Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"

Wicced_Witch
Member

since 2000-02-06

Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA

10 posted 2000-07-06 05:22 PM

I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was very good. It goes to show you never really know what you got until it is gone. Keep up the good work, i look forward to reading more from you.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

11 posted 2007-12-01 10:33 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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