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Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
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washing DC

0 posted 2000-07-06 04:38 PM


SWING:BPM 90
(or just snap your fingers as you read)

              I dreamed of you again

Last night.

              Maybe you'll never know me like that

And you'll never know about my dream.


              It would only serve to repulse you

Because I know you're not

              Like that.

© Copyright 2000 Jose Marti - All Rights Reserved
Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-07-06 04:51 PM


hey there, i liked this poem, because it left your dream in there imaginations.  I hope that you find that special someone to share the dream with.

Luv always,
Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-07-06 05:35 PM


well i hope that whoever you wrote this for will find out how you feel...tell this person how you feel then she will know instead of never knowing...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-01 10:33 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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