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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg 
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(Just did one in my head... hope you don't get mad, man. ^_^) Hardly ever posts replies to all that he sees call him Lakewalker |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Haha I liked it. Very good allan.......you don't know how right you are about him.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
HAHA True... So True This actually started a huge TP/Snowball/water fight/party... er yeah... or something like that. You should have been here... But yes, Lake should post more poems, because him poems really are quite good. Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Heh, nice Haiku ~_~ though, I don't think he's the only one who should post more (hasn't been around since thanksgiving) ~_~. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Allan: Very good. Brought a smile to my face.  ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great work... Just managed to squeeze that out while laughing about the memories... You are right on the mark though allan!! Love Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Arrrrrrrgh! Why do you people make me share??? Maybe I'll post some things in Teen Poetry #4 soon, but no promises I'm not mad, I'm used to people telling me to post more, for some reason I just don't like to. Is that a crime  ?? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
yep I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
*nods* good one allan ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Don't take this too seriously, Lake! I'm only teasing a little.  Don't ever change to satisfy anybody but yourself. This is my thought of the day. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, I know it wasn't meant to be too serious. A lot of people tease me, I'm use to it Dopey, you're not the poetry police are you? *Lakewalker slips out of the room hoping he wasn't noticed*"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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