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Why won't you..... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Why won't you come into my life tonight < !signature-->Why are you not on my doorstep with a fire in your eyes And your soul exposed upon your lips I long for you to purge all of this pain with your friendship laced kiss Why won't you hold me tight As I lie fast asleep tonight Consumed by tears and a shrouding headache Why are you unable to kiss away all of this heartache I thought I felt you close so many times before But always turned out to be the wrong one Knocking upon my heart's door When will I exactly know That I finally found what I've been searching for? Will you even give me a clue When I finally find myself loving you And will you even let me know When you've finally reached the very depths of my soul The one place the sun never shines and where it always snows... "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Oh Ceinwyn  Do you have to make me cry with your poems? This is so sad. I'm sorry to see that you are going thru some rought times right now. Well, I'm hoping that the poem doesn't actually relate to your life right now, but with such emotions in it, it's pretty hard to say it's not. I love your poem...These are the type of poems that I wish someone would write to me I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a nice poem. Sad though......Very good regardless.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
sad poems show some of us how lucky we are, which is why i like them so much thanks for the wonderful read and best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is written so well, it's really great one. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This poem expresses what i feel and what is going on in my life so well. I thought it was very well written and i especially liked it since i could relate so very much to it. Great job! |
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