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lilpoet
Member

since 2000-12-30

Posts 55
Dallas,Tx

0 posted 2001-01-09 05:05 PM

In our own little world
There's just me and you
We have so much to live for
So much to see and do

We'll live our life together
Without any fear
In our own little world
You'll always be here

There's so much happiness
And we'll get to see it all
We'll live our life with no worries
Like in reality we saw

I love our little world
And think about it everyday
But back we go into reality
And that's where we'll have to stay

~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

1 posted 2001-01-09 05:13 PM

this was so awesome lilpoet! i thought it was awesome and very creative. Great poem

Curly

"Well if you just close your eyes
and just imagine everything's alright
you should not hide your tears
cuz they were sent to wash away those years"

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-01-09 05:17 PM

You amaze me again, lilpoet.
This poem is great, it made me think about the importance of our little worlds...
Very good. I write about my own little world a lot, but it would be removed from this board if I posted it because of content! ~_^
Hope to see you later.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2001-01-09 08:26 PM

Very well expressed here, this is written so well!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-01-09 08:42 PM

This is so cute! kinda reminds me of my recent one, "Dream Away" *L* Nice work

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-01-09 09:55 PM

This was a nice little poem. Sometimes reality can break its boundaries and fall upon the lines of fantasy......Good luck with everything and I hope your reality turns fantasy.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

6 posted 2001-01-11 06:32 PM

i think this poem is the cutest!!!! you did a great job

i want to read more like this!!!! LOL

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

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