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Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

0 posted 2001-01-09 04:03 PM

Filled with rage and anger,
Keep away I'm a stranger.
Your world isn't mine,
My world I can't define.
Living in the past,
Life changes way too fast.
Living in a bloody bloody mess,
I could really care less.
Nothing more to live for,
Life seems such a bore.
Everyone treats me like a punk,
Awoke to realize my life is sunk.
Urgency to kill,
Need one last thrill.
Just a misunderstood man,
Whos life is in a can.
Pierceings and tattoos don't make me who I am,
Still you find it fun to discreminate and slam.
From a window another gunshot rings out,
Her blood pours from her once beating spout.
Realizing I'm on a highway to hell,
Throw a penny into a wishing well.
Make a wish hope it comes true,
Damn what can I do?
How do I move on with life?
Taking every ounce of energy each day and strife.
Hoping it gets better soon,
Hope I live to feed baby from a spoon.
Murder bound and recklass,
Holding on tight to her necklace.
Never let go,
For what else do I have to show?
Scars of battle,
Branded like a heard of cattle.
Holding on clinging with all my might,
Slowly I'm slipping out of sight.
Enraged once again,
And now the pain does begin.
People say I need a new tune,
The day will come maybe soon.
Breaker breaker here comes the caper,
Strait with taper the evil skyscraper.
Listening to the sound of death in my heart,
Once again the evil will start.
Dealing with rage and pain,
My heart it does stain.
Rocking in the house of rain,
My soul it does drain.
Anger me and get hurt,
Enrage me get put in the dirt.
I'm not a killer,
Though I am a raging thriller.
If you cross my path,
I'll make sure you feel my wrath.
Give and you'll receive,
Cherish every breath you breathe.

*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-01-09 04:13 PM

Chilling... excellent at setting the mood, you are.
This one got to me. Two thumbs up.

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

2 posted 2001-01-09 05:24 PM

good poem
I have felt this way a lot in my life.

Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

3 posted 2001-01-09 05:27 PM

thanks allan thats what i wanted it to do

thanks man im sure everyone has, but this is bout a certain event in my life, i have others that explain it better

Angel
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since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2001-01-09 08:55 PM

Author Unknown,

Wow.

~Susie

"Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?"
~Cinderella

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-01-09 09:59 PM

I'm going to have to echo the rest on this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2001-01-11 02:34 PM

Very well said, your poem is great.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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