Teen Poetry #3 |
Your Only Sunshine |
jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
the rain is thick the afternoon giggles at me and you behind me still chasing my skirt until I give in your hair wet with the gray sky dark eyes with ocean of secrets for me to drown in I love them I hope they remember I am your sunshine... your only sunshine |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
You've conveyed so much. It can be interpreted as so many different things in so many different ways. I love your style! The choppy flow makes a rythm of it's own in the heart. Please let us see more! TAP2 |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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