Teen Poetry #3 |
My Sister, My friend |
Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
You're... My sister, My friend, Through good times and bad My sister, My friend, Through happy and sad, Beside me you stand, Beside me you walk, You're there to listen, You're there to talk, With happiness, With smiles, With pain and tears, I know you'll be there, throughout the years! "True friends stab you in the front" |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
I really like this poem. It reminds me of the bond that my sister and I have. It is great that you can rely on your sister. BabyGirl1 |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
It's simple, yet sweet. Someday, I'm gonna write something like that for my little sis..she's one of my best friends anymore. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That's a really good poem!! And it's great that you two have that good of a relationship. Keep up the writing! Bel |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this one i like alot it shows a true caring in it. enjoyed it much keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a beautiful poem...to bad me and my sister are not like that...all we ever do is fight...its cool though how some people have really good relationships with there brothers or sisters... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Definately sweet I must say. I and I have a question for you about it, but I don't htink it belongs here so I'll ask you later as it will just stay between us! anyways, very endearing and sweet. Nicely done! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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