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Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-07-02 03:58 PM


You're...
My sister,
My friend,
Through good times and bad
My sister,
My friend,
Through happy and sad,
Beside me you stand,
Beside me you walk,
You're there to listen,
You're there to talk,
With happiness,
With smiles,
With pain and tears,
I know you'll be there, throughout the years!



"True friends stab you in the front"

© Copyright 2000 Michelle Y. Plocinik - All Rights Reserved
BabyGirl1
Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91
Morris, IL
1 posted 2000-07-02 05:51 PM


I really like this poem.  It reminds me of the bond that my sister and I have.  It is great that you can rely on your sister.

BabyGirl1

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
2 posted 2000-07-02 10:36 PM


It's simple, yet sweet.  Someday, I'm gonna write something like that for my little sis..she's one of my best friends anymore.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

3 posted 2000-07-02 10:39 PM


That's a really good poem!!  And it's great that you two have that good of a relationship.  Keep up the writing!
Bel

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-07-03 12:53 PM


this one i like alot it shows a true caring in it. enjoyed it much keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-07-03 01:46 AM


this is a beautiful poem...to bad me and my sister are not like that...all we ever do is fight...its cool though how some people have really good relationships with there brothers or sisters...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
6 posted 2000-07-03 08:11 PM


Definately sweet I must say. I and I have a question for you about it, but I don't htink it belongs here so I'll ask you later as it will just stay between us!   anyways, very endearing and sweet. Nicely done! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2007-12-01 06:57 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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