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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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Well, people have been saying to post more. I don't see why, but you asked for it. Here is another attempt at poetry. Michelle... M emories of those times I thought you'd be my wife C all me back to my past H indering the progress of my life E ngrossing my every thought L onging for nothing new L ooking over my shoulder.... I'm E ndlessly haunted. Missing you < !signature--> "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Well done, Jason. I absolutely love acronyms-- they take such patience and ability to write. Reminds me of the old days, in elementary school, when we had to write an acronym of our name with self-descriptive words (and poor alex had the toughest time of all) I remember making a phrase rather than just a few adjectives, and getting yelled at for it! Ah, memories! Maybe I'll go write a nice little acronym. Thanks for reminding me of the format. You probably had loads of fun writing it! I enjoyed reading it! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
allan brings up the best memories.. i remember all those too! thanks for the reminder IsGona Beaitiful peice best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful acrostic IsGona! Beautiful flow, very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a good one Jason. I liked it a lot. Very well written and thought out. I couldn't have done this. Nice one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Author Unknown Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 57Linn MO USA |
pretty good man, especially when a moderator leaves a reply to ya work *dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001 |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good job Jason. This girl must have been really special.... wife, eh? I can't even fathom marriage yet... I couldn't imagine any of the guys I've dated being with me for a lifetime! Well, nice work! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Allen ~ thanks.. I lok forward to hearing an acrostic form you. Jeremy ~ The good ol' days huh? hehe thanks man. Kit ~ you are very kind. Much thanks Dopey Dope ~ Wow look I actually had the energy to right your whole name.. lol Thanks alot. Much apreciated. Unknown ~ thank you. Glad you liked it. Jenn ~ Thanks alot. This girl was and IS very special to me. Life Just took us in seperate directions. But yeah... I thought she was going to be my wife. She is still a great friend just long distance at the time... who knows what the future holds but I just miss her and the times we spent together... hence the poem. Thanks again. sorry for babling... ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You did an excellent job with this style of writing, the poem is done very well. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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