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Found An Angel
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Found An Angel |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
~This is an old one...please always be honest on replying on my poetry~ I believe in dreams and luck I think we all can give a hug Maybe I have no friends around Maybe no girls, yet, in my life Maybe and maybe and maybe But I do have a heart I think about my future and dreams Will I meet a girl that love me for me? Will we live in peace forever? Will we be alone and together? Is it all, for real, no matter? Well, I just don't know the answer My girl won't leave me whatever My love will make my life much better She's my mom, dad, sister and brother But, that's just a dream of mine Once, I found an angel She's so beautiful, in my eyes and... She's so sweet, nice and lovely I met her, or she met me, I dunno All I know that God sent her to me That's all! I can't say more! She's my best friend...she's so, so sweet She loves me, truely, and... Wanna spend all her time with me Yeah, dreams are hard to come true But this girl is here, in our real world She's more perfect than my dream's girl She gonna do all I said here, and... She like to hear my words, but... Sayin' "I love you" won't be enough Sayin' sweet words won't be enough Givin' her all she want won't be enough Whatever I do for her won't be enough She want me to smile all the time That's what I want too, but... I just always forget! But no. While with her I never forget that Sorry if I lied before Coz I need love, more and more Wanna true love, just like now Wanna give u hug, and I hope I'll do soon Baby, it's time to go, coz I can see the moon ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
I enjoyed reading this peice but I got a little confused... Is she your lover or your best friend... or both?? I am lost... HELP... Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Sounds like you like this girl. But I was rather confused too... kinda hard trying to follow who she was... It might help if you would clarify, thanks. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
I always mean it not telling ppl what I mean 'exactly' in my poems but this time I'll tell u: she's my ex-girlfriend right now. she was both my lover and my best friend. thank u both for replying!! ~lotsa luv< !signature--> "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" [This message has been edited by GirlsBestFriend (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice to see you opening up a bit and telling us who the poem is about. Nice poem....i enjoyed the read.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Nice I enjoyed this poem. It showed how you truly felt about this girl. Jon |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
GBF ~ this is a nice poem. I understand your fear to completely share your self but this is one of the greatest places to do that. Thanks for the little insgiht into your life it gives more meaning to the poem... great job. Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
thanks again all of u who read my writings and especially who replied. the idea which's going in my head is u'll understand -mostly- everything I'm trying to say slowly, and by reading my poems one by one...I'm glad u all care here, so do I. ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
This was a very smiley poem. I'm sorry I missed it yesterday! The thoughts are good, the emotion is good, its alllll good.  ~Carly inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is written well, you've done a really good job on it. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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