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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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This poem has been deleted due to refrence to suicide. Although we appreciate the disclaimer, it does not change the content of the piece. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail myself or any of the moderators. [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 01-08-2001).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I better reply quick... They might boot this one.... I hope not, because it is a good piece. I think it descibes the pits of depression nicely. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
a tad risky, but very descriptive im sure we all feel this way sooner or later awesome work my friend ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey man. Again, you prove talent and an understanding of things that I try not to see.... ~Carly inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I enjoyed this poem, but it makes me uneasy. [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"Ain't that sweet? A death transaction." Well worded as usual man, good job on this one! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
That was great man. even though it does seem a bit morbid. Sometimes the only way to avoid suicide is to write about it. Confusing yes but then again the human mind is an enigma in itself. |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
I agree with Poet on Acid. I'm sure some ppl will learn from ur poems Dopey! good luck!! ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I used to write poem with this same depressing tone so I can relate. Depression gets a hold of all of us sometimes, but you just got to remember that there is always something to look forward to. I know you know this already so I guess I'm just reminding myself. Nice job. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that is really really sad! Suicide is...just really depressing!!! Ok I am going to shut up now...before I start confusing myself again...been doing that a lot today!! Well great poem, keep it up!! Luv Always, Priscilla How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you" and mean it, but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Hmmm...I had this thought earlier today...with me losing alot of ppl in my life...not nessicerily by death...but well, I kinda get the feeling Justin's slipping away  oh, by the way, Dopey...Nice Pic  www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
lol!hey there mr. Nike commercial, "just do it". lol. you put your pic up before me.grr amazing poem thats why im replying. I think thats a description that fits depression..but i wouldnt know anything about that... it was really well expressed Regina |
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