This'll Be My Last Heartache

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lilpoet
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since 2000-12-30

Posts 55
Dallas,Tx

0 posted 2001-01-06 07:33 PM

This'll be my last heartache
I won't have tears that turn into a lake
We'll always be together
I'll be in love forever
In your arms will be my favorite place
And I will only want to see your face
Perfect is what my life will be
Wish everyone had my eyes to see
I know I'll have some troubles
But they'll be solved with his cuddles
No more happieness shall I fake
This'll be my last heartache

*now this poem doesn't mean I've found the one...it just means that I dream of him*

~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~

mikeykrazy
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since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

1 posted 2001-01-06 07:50 PM

i liked the poem i see a wourld of hert that you have had. hope is all gets better

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

Author Unknown
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since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

2 posted 2001-01-06 08:22 PM

very nice, good to write bout ya dreams and such

*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-01-06 09:05 PM

This was nice. We can all dream about our Mr/Mrs. Right's......hope we all inevitably find him/her.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-01-06 11:35 PM

ah how fun it is to dream of our one true love! Boy, do I know the feeling! *LMAO* Nice work

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-01-06 11:42 PM

Be wary of what you dream-- it can result in unrealistic standards, and can keep you from ever finding happiness, if you are not careful.
I'm not gonna be a party pooper. Nice work, i enjoyed the overall mood of the poem.

DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

6 posted 2001-01-07 12:08 PM

I really liked this one...I feel the same way. I want to find the perfect man that will never break my heart and will make me truely happy. I hope you find your Mr.Right soon...and I hope I find mine too! Great poem...I really enjoyed it.

Melster
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since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

7 posted 2001-01-07 03:14 AM

Never fall short of your dreams... if we do, what are we dreaming for?? Good Luck and I hope someday you can find someone to make you eternally happy!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

8 posted 2001-01-07 02:00 PM

Nice job of writing this one about your future "one"

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

9 posted 2001-01-07 03:26 PM

This poem is great. I think that we all are destined to find mr./mrs right and when we find them i think that we all need to read them this poem. LOL and give *lilpoet* credit of course

awesome job

*Valerie*

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

IsGona
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since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

10 posted 2001-01-07 03:34 PM

It's a beautiful dream. I sincerely hope it comes true for you.
JAson< !signature-->

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

[This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 01-07-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

11 posted 2001-01-08 07:18 PM

There is nothing wrong with dreaming

The poem was short but really sweet
Why can't we all just find the right one
the one that fits exactly in our arms

thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

12 posted 2001-01-08 07:24 PM

WONDERFUL!! reminds em of something i would write about

great work! i love it!!

~*Pixie*~

Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

13 posted 2001-01-08 09:12 PM

a dream of your one true love may be the only thing that can rise you above the sadness and strife that accompanies life. It was a very beautiful poem, I hope you find someone who deserves ya. and keep writing.

"write what you know, and no one knows you better than yourself" -Me (aren't I just full of fun little stuff like that?)

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