Teen Poetry #3 |
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Open Up To Me |
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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
Please open up to me Let your heart be free I promise I won't hurt you Cause I know this love is true Don't hold it all inside You know, before your heart has cried If you ever shed one tear Know I'm always going to be here You don't understand how much I care So if somthing's wrong, please do share I'm not here to be mean or judge On your journey of life I'll give you a little nudge I can't make you open up You'll have to do it on your own Just know that I'm always here for you And you are not alone *this is dedicated to my best friend. he has been going through a lot and he just keeps it all inside and won't tell me till like a week after it happens* ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
wow! fabulous! u won't believe that my best friend saying the same about me. she always say that I hide it and I don't tell anyone. I love your poetry. great job & keep posting...ohh...I do love ur signature lilpoet like u do! ![]() ~lotsa luv< !signature--> "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" [This message has been edited by GirlsBestFriend (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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CareBear3 Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 39New Hampshire |
This is really sweet. This friend is very lucky to have a friend like you! Nice Job. "In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable" ~Kelley |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great work... just a little word of advice... just give your friend time and space... they may feel the need to work things out on their own... I often do this... My friend gets dirty at me when I don't tell her when something is on my mind or something is bothering me, but that is all because I need to work it out myself, there are some things in life that you need to figure out yourself, just give your friend time and in time they will tell you what is happening and chances are they will know what they are going to do about it and be able to tell you that too... then they can be happy that they have the ability to fix their own troubles and not burden them on others~! Good Luck, Love the poem and keep posting!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice poem. A good one for yer friend. You oughta show it to him/her , i'm sure he/she would appreciate it. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
Thanks everyone for your replys. And dopey, it's a he. lol. I showed it to him and he liked it and he told me that he understood. I think that poem really got to him. He was very understanding and told me that he loved me! I think it worked cause that's considering opening up. Thanks a lot guys for your advice. ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is so cool. I'll admit it, I sometimes hide my feelings ![]() ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i agree with Mels on thi one. it still doesnt make it wrong for you to show how much you do care for your friend though. He is lucky to have someone like you as a friend I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I am shur that he'll open up to you when he's ready, just dont take any offense to it cuz some people are just more personal then others. I am shur that he knows that you care a great deal about him and knows that he can talk to you, he'll come around. Great poem ![]() |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
great poem, good luck opening him up ![]() |
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