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Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

0 posted 2000-09-03 06:48 PM

Once you belonged to me,
but now you are gone.
I really wish that i could see,
just where things went wrong.

I never seemed to listen,
to things that other people said.
But now i wish I had,
jumbled thoughts flow through my head.

Now it seems I don't exist,
maybe i never did.
I guess that is for you to decide,
and memories of you for me to rid.

Now that things are changing,
I am with someone new.
I learned so many lessons,
from my time with you.

I try not to be bitter,
dispite all this pain.
Bit maybe if i think long enough,
there will be something to gain.

I really hope you will be happy,
in whatever you will do.
Just know that i wil lnever forget,
all my days with you.

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-09-03 08:10 PM

A sweet good-bye! I'm glad you aren't holding a grudge or anything of the sort! Break ups can be hard, but it's not like the days don't go on. I'm glad you're not dwelling over it or anything! that's good!!! Anyways, wonderful and cute poem, keep it up!! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~

~*~If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm.:)~*~

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

2 posted 2000-09-03 10:19 PM

Hello, my name is deranger I’m a little less sanier then your average animal trainer…

Anywho, failing sanity aside, I am proud of you. It takes a strong person to acknowledge the truth. I solute you!

Lalablahbanaa,

---
Spreading insanity, one post at a time

“Writing about darkness comes easily for me. I just close my eyes and write what I

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-09-04 08:42 AM

What a wonderfully, positive attitude you've expressed PixieBabe! Very nicely written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

4 posted 2000-09-04 12:45 PM

Thank you, Kit an Deranger for the great reviews of my poem, i am glad you enjoyed it!
~*Pixie*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-09-04 02:52 PM

Pixie~~~This is really good!!!Breaking up can be hard but it sounds like you past all that hurting...I cant tell you how much it hurt when me and my best friend broke up (if thats what you want to call it)...He was so special to me...Then one day he was gone...Keep up the good work!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-01-08 08:38 PM

seldom do i see such a thing in a person
you must have a really beautiful heart to do such a thing
i'v never read someone right a poem about their ex and still wish them luck in life
Very beautiful post, if i may add
thanks for the beautiful read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-01-09 12:47 PM

This was a great one. I liked it a lot. Do you still have feelings for this guy?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

8 posted 2001-01-09 02:17 PM

Hey, this is from a while ago I see, thanks for bumping it up acire

This poem is written very well!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

9 posted 2001-01-09 06:01 PM

Acire- *blushes* thank you for the wonderful reply and for bumping this back up

it is one of my faves

Lakewalker- thank you and i am glad you liekd this

Javier- i am glad you liekd this poem.. i wrote it back in the summer.. ino i dont; have feelings for the guy anymore.. atleast not like i did.. we can barely hold a conversation anymore...

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2001-01-13 11:45 PM

Keep ur chin up hun--just remember...everything happens for a reason

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

11 posted 2001-01-14 09:52 PM

thank you sugarhigh

it seems the guy was easier to get over than i thought he would be... jerk.. LMAO

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