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Revenge of An Enraged Child
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Revenge of An Enraged Child |
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Author Unknown Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 57Linn MO USA |
This poem has been deleted due to the violent and graphic nature contained. [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 01-10-2001).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
from your poems today I have learned alot about you. you obviesly have had a rough life. I'm not sure if these emotions revolve around one incedent or a child hood of them, but whatever the case I hope you will be able to turn things around. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
wow, vividly violent that one was. Anything that could invoke such emotions must have been quite cruel. I don't know what happened and I don't dare say I understand but I hope you have, or are begining to, realize you can conquer your past and use it to take on the future. In any case keep writing. "Life is a game that no one makes out of alive" -ME! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow that was violent. Well a good show of raw rage right there. Nice one pal. Good way to vent.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yes, certainly violent, but well expressed. This is good, but I don't know how the moderators will feel about this one. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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