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0 posted 2001-01-08 12:28 PM


This poem has been deleted due to the violent and graphic nature contained.

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 01-10-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Kyle Finn - All Rights Reserved
IsGona
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1 posted 2001-01-08 12:34 PM


from your poems today I have learned alot about you.  you obviesly have had a rough life.  I'm not sure if these emotions revolve around one incedent or a child hood of them, but whatever the case I hope you will be able to turn things around.

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Poet on Acid
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2 posted 2001-01-08 02:32 PM


wow, vividly violent that one was. Anything that could invoke such emotions must have been quite cruel. I don't know what happened and I don't dare say I understand but I hope you have, or are begining to, realize you can conquer your past and use it to take on the future. In any case keep writing.

"Life is a game that no one makes out of alive" -ME!

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3 posted 2001-01-08 07:42 PM


Wow that was violent. Well a good show of raw rage right there. Nice one pal.
Good way to vent.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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4 posted 2001-01-09 01:18 PM


Yes, certainly violent, but well expressed.  This is good, but I don't know how the moderators will feel about this one.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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