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Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

0 posted 2001-01-07 02:07 PM

Everyone has a mercyless fate,
Waiting to see if God's going to blow the gate.
You set your fate as well as mine,
Thru tragedy I still shine.
Where i succeed you shall fail,
Live your life in jail.
Murderous ways in your mind,
Answers I can and will find.
Kill one destroy another,
Her biggest dream to be a mother.
Slight of hand and stolen fate,
Damn shame it had to be your best trait.
Turned to life on the street,
Everywhere I go new people I meet.
but wherever I may roam,
The streets will always be my home.
Come visit me on my block,
Better drop your glock.
The people on the streets dont play,
What the hell you want me to say?
You'll die a slow painless death,
At least you'll know when you took your last breath.
Never again will you see,
Someone so full of hate as me.
When the time comes you will know,
It was me holding her in the blood stained snow.
Judges rule: Death by electric chair,
I suppose that seems fair.
Turn back the hands of time,
Listen to her sweet voice sing and chime.
Memories come and go,
I miss her how much you'll NEVER know.
Everyone has a mercyless fate,
Waiting to see if God's going to blow their gate...

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2001-01-07 02:42 PM

You write so well about this horrible event in your life. I guess I don't really know what to say, I don't know how to reply to this one.

"Never again will you see,
Someone so full of hate as me."

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

2 posted 2001-01-07 02:46 PM

i just take things that happen to me or around me and write bout it, usually its emotions but somtimes theres just goof off stuff or things like the one bout my sister

*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

3 posted 2001-01-07 05:12 PM

This is soo powerful, I hope that one day you can come to grips with what happens... Im here if ya want to talk..

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-01-07 08:14 PM

Nice poem, sorry about what happened though. Wonderful, powerful emotion here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

5 posted 2001-01-07 08:57 PM

thanks mel, i might just take ya up on that somtime

and dopey once again thanks brah

appreciate the encouragement

let me know when yall get tired of all this morbidness and ill think of somthin happy

*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-01-09 07:37 PM

I really liked this one. Good job

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