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StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado

0 posted 2000-07-03 08:21 PM


Just a simple poem to mark my 300th post
And I Think I'll dedicate it to a person who means the most.

Jeremy, you've helped me so much with your words and kindness
You've seemed to help me through this deadly blindness

I doubt that you know just what you've done
To my life you've brought a little more sun.

You inspire me with your words that flow
You enchant me in more ways than you will ever know

I'm so glad that I met you here because we have a friendship-a special kind
In reading your poems I've earned my way into your intruiging mind

Thank you so much for everything you do
You've made my world a little less blue

I guess what I'm trying to say is thanks for befriending me
Because until I met you I didn't know what it was like to be

You have a wonderful personality and a run over heart
But I know that your heart will get better when you get a new start

Thank you Jeremy, for being my friend and helping me through
What it was in my life I couldn't find a way to get myself through

Jeremy~you dedicated one to me, so I guess it's my turn to dedicate mine to you, thank you so much for teaching me everything you have! You have done a lot, and I'm glad you are my friend!
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~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~


[This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 07-03-2000).]

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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-07-04 01:44 AM


well i do hope Jeremy comes in to read this. and give you some of his ideas about it. well really enjoyed the poem and i know he will to.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-07-04 06:10 AM


What a lovely tribute to Jeremy, Jessica! It's amazing the friendships you can create within the walls of Passions.  This is a wonderful and touching poem, your sentiments are beautifully expressed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Jacman
Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
3 posted 2000-07-04 04:39 PM


Well you said you were going to do this, so I wasn't suprised to see it.  I know how you feel, and I'm glad that he is my friend to.

Love jason

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-07-04 05:12 PM


congratulations jessica...you made it to 300 already...im only half way there...this is such a sweet poem...i hope jeremy likes it alot...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
5 posted 2000-07-04 05:34 PM


thank you all for your replies!! They mean alot! guess I'm working towards the big 400 now huh?!?! hahaha.    Erin~you'll get there soon enough! hehehe. Love you all!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~    

~*~My fire is dead,it knew no pain; yet it is dead and I remain: All stiff with ice ashes lie;and they are dead, and I will die~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
6 posted 2000-07-04 07:06 PM


I'm really not sure what I've said and when, but I can sleep a little more peacfully now.  Everyday, I wish I can touch somebody, teach somebody...tell somebody the words that make pain either less or simply not such a bad thing.  You make me feel as though I've succeded in all of my petty ambitions.  You've been a companion and source of friendship to me at a time when I needed it and for that...you have my undying friendship, appreciation, and love.

Jeremy D. Halstead

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
7 posted 2000-07-05 02:31 PM


Jessica, I enjoyed this poem very much.  I hope that one day you will dedicate a poem about me, just kidding.  I am glad that you made a great friend like Jeremy.  I hope to read more.  He's my friend too.

Luv always,
Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2007-12-01 08:05 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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