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Teen Poetry #3

Painful Memories

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-07-04 06:17 PM

**This poem is dedicated to the my first love...the guy that stole my heart from me...then stomped on it...and broke it into a million little pieces...i still care about him...but only as my friend now...after all this happened it took me 4 months just to be able to say hello to him again...

You have caused me so much pain
and for that my love for you will never be regained.

You put a deep scar in my heart,
then you wanted to put back together the broken parts.

The memories that we once shared,
made me realize that in the past maybe you did really care.

But all I want to ask is why,
why did you do this to me, did you really want to see me cry?

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2000-07-04 07:29 PM

Well, Erin...he never wanted to see you cry. But in time, he did want other things and the inevitabilty of your pain was something he was simply willing to sacrifice.
Forgiveness is devine and if he's seen the error of his ways, then you should be thankful, because most people never do.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-07-05 05:43 AM

You've expressed your sentiments well in this Erin ... it is sometimes difficult to find answers like these, but in time, it may become clear. Lovely verse!

Best wishes for happiness and answers,
/Kit

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

3 posted 2000-07-05 02:36 PM

Very well written, Erin. I hope that it will get better, and I do know the feeling. Well keep your head up, and the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-12-01 08:05 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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