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mikeykrazy
Junior Member

since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

0 posted 2001-01-06 07:12 PM

this is how i feel about my newest girlfriend

in this life things are done, the casters plage is only one
undo my trife, i have given to my life
the one i call dre, that makes my life a fray
i wish that she hath never seen and know my life
have her forget me and go away
that i will no longer lead her stray
let this night of a new moon
bring me my wish to hold true

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-06 09:17 PM

I think this poem is a bit confusing. At least for me it is....Could you explain this a bit. I understand this is how you feel for your GF, but could you elaborate on what you mean by the lines within the poem?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

mikeykrazy
Junior Member

since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

2 posted 2001-01-06 10:19 PM

this is something that i wish would happen to my new girlfriend. she cheted on me that is y

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-01-06 11:45 PM

dang, you're good
this is only the 2nd poem of your that i've read, but i'm already very impressed

thanks for the most astonishing read
keep em coming

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-01-07 12:08 PM

Vengeance in poetry! I love it!
Skrew the dark one... down with your GIRLFRIEND! j/k

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2001-01-07 01:36 PM

That's not cool that she cheated. Great job on the poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

6 posted 2001-01-07 04:38 PM

Great poem... cheaters ought to rot in hell... and one day they will... I know how you feel...

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

mikeykrazy
Junior Member

since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

7 posted 2001-01-08 06:58 PM

thatks to all that have replyed.

acire: thanks i post every once and a while just keep looking.  thanks for the coment

Allan: not down with her, but just i wish she would leve me alone.

well thanks for your comments!

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

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