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mikeykrazy
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since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

0 posted 2001-01-06 07:08 PM

let not the anonmous death grace my back
this the life that is altered form the gore of existance
brought not be the vital flame but by the vally of death
where the old serpent of Adam's time lies in wait
for the day of reckoning when he will arise
to try to retake the thrown of moast grace
the dark on will once agian be over taken

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-06 09:23 PM

This was nice. I liked this one. Down with the dark one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-01-06 11:41 PM

wow!!!

Bravo Bravo Bravo

Dang, that was really good

Gravo!!!

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-01-07 12:05 PM

A good poem.
Down with the dark one?  Pesonally, I'm not taking sides between light and dark, not in this lifetime.
But I won't interfere with your belief.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2001-01-07 01:29 PM

This poem is written well, good job on it!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

5 posted 2001-01-07 04:35 PM

Good work, great poem... keep up the great work!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

mikeykrazy
Junior Member

since 2000-12-20

Posts 37
U.S.A

6 posted 2001-01-08 07:07 PM

thank you all for what you have said. i like that i can show all of you my work.

acire: thanks for that.

Allan: this isn't about what side i'm on it just worked out this way.

thanks for the rest that replayed.

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

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