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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
This poem is set to a swing beat at about 90 bpm kind of like a beatnick poem. (just snap your fingers as you read) CASTILLIAN: How I feel towards you Can't never be expressed You see my love, My words of passion, Are spoken In a foreign tounge The Castillian tounge Of my forefathers Well… More of a contemporary Spanglish really. All of my ugly dirty words… In English All of my lovley beautiful words… In Spanish. The tradjedy is, You were born To hear all of my Spanish words But you only understand The English words. I'm sorry. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Jose- Hi! That was a good one....is it your first post? I don't think I've ever seen you here before. Keep it up Bel |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
A beautiful one indeed! I'm glad to see you are able to express your self so freely. And I must say that Spanish is a prettier sounding language. (I suppose that is why it is deemed a "romance language") Anyways, it was wonderful! Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ p.s. Bienvenidos!! ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Love it!!!!! Fate deals us a hard blow sometimes, restricting us to the things we can and can't express. Lucky for all of us you can express them on paper. Hope to see more from you soon. TAP2 P.S. You got my vote. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Jose! I really enjoyed your first post, and hope to see more from you ... Spanish really is a beautiful language! Check your e-mail for a special message shortly! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i welcome you here as well. i enjoyed this one of yours alot but do hope to see more real soon. well keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
This being your first post, I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work. You are a great friend. I hope you keep this up. Luv always, Michelle "True friends stab you in the front" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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