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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
Looking left to the right Searching the halls for you But your nowhere in sight I have spotted to my delight Only now I am searching for The courage to ask you out tonight By the sound of the bell The opportunity has passed Now I must wait until next class --Neo [This message has been edited by Neokrew (edited 01-06-2001).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Oh this is good. They never give you enough time between classes... hehe. Hope that you didn't lose your courage during biology(or whatever class you had) Nice on Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Author Unknown Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 57Linn MO USA |
this is a great poem 5 minutes isnt enough time to really do anything except find your wallet if youre lucky, really nice poem *dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001 |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Great poem-- brings back lots of memories for me. Keep it up. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was nice. YEa a lot of missed opportunities are all due to our lack of innitiative. When it comes to a woman, i think we all just need to suck it up and go get 'em.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
The good old school days... I miss 'em... I always loved school, trust me once it's over you will miss it, it gives ya something to do... staring at that gorgeous guy or gal in your biology, chemistry, physics, maths, english, latin, french, accounting, business, shall I go on... no i am babbaling now.... Great poem.... I hope one day you get up the nerve to go and speak to this person!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
And did you ever ask them out? I like the way this is written, nice job on it  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
Hey, Nope lake never got up the guts --Neo |
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